In a workshop classroom, all authors are mentors. They are teachers of the craft of writing, and the foundation of the workshop model is built on acknowledging and celebrating them as such. All writers are apprentices of other writers–Stephen King notes this in On Writing, Katie Wood Ray points this out in Wondrous Words, and Penny Kittle champions this in Write Beside Them.
This week, we’ve practiced treating two types of writers as mentors in our classroom–published authors and student writers.
Once we set up our writer’s notebooks, we began filling them with all things personal to us. Heart maps, important photos, our hands, lifelines, reading histories, and more. Then, we turned to adding the words of other writers.
I wanted to show students the power of other writers’ words. I wanted to teach them to read poetry not to “torture a confession out of it…to find out what it really means,” as Billy Collins writes, but to celebrate the act of simply reading that poem. So, we glued in an excerpt from Jacqueline Woodson’s Brown Girl Dreaming. I modeled for students how to respond to Jacqueline as a real writer, to notice and note her craft moves, to be inspired by her ideas and write more about our own feelings on those topics. We wrote atop her poem, prioritizing our responses, reactions, and ideas rather than some analysis or “dulling down” of her meaning. Responding personally and authentically to published authors will become an important part of our daily routine in our writer’s workshop.
I invited students to enter into a written dialogue with the authors we read. So, as I settled down this weekend to begin reading a tall pile of student writing that had been turned in, I knew I had to walk the talk, as Amy always reminds me I must. I ask students to treat authors as real people worthy of critical response, so why would I treat my student writers any differently? I’ve always struggled with how to grade/evaluate/respond to student writing, but I’m thinking about it in a new way this year. I just want to have conversations with my students about their writing, whether it’s in the form of a writing conference or in a weekend session with a stack of papers. I know that when these conversations occur, student growth will follow. In the excellent Portfolio Portraits, edited by Don Graves and Bonnie Sunstein, Linda Rief writes in an essay titled “Finding the value in Evaluation:”
I have discovered that students know themselves as learners better than anyone else. They set goals for themselves and judge how well they reach those goals. They thoughtfully and honestly evaluate their own learning with far more detail and introspection than I thought possible. Ultimately, they show me who they are as readers, writers, thinkers, and human beings.
My thinking aligns with Linda’s. When I remove myself from the role of “grader” or “evaluator,” I become an authentic reader of my students’ writing. I invite students to assess their own writing, which in the words of Linda Rief “shows the value in evaluation.”
So this weekend, I read my students’ writing like I read books. I noted beautiful lines they wrote, jotted down spiffy words they harnessed, and responded to thought-provoking ideas I saw them getting at. I asked them questions, wondered about their meanings, and looked very much forward to reading more of their words in the future. I will confer with students as I return their papers, and we’ll talk about how they might move forward with some of the topics, ideas, and stories they’d begun in these early writings.
In our classroom, we consider our responses to published writing as important as the writing itself. The value of reading and writing lies in the interaction between the reader and the words, as Louise Rosenblatt describes. When I transfer that value from the way I want my students reading writing to the way I want to read my students’ writing, new and important opportunities for student learning occur.
Tagged: Conferring, evaluation, Grading, jacqueline woodson, katie wood ray, linda rief, penny kittle, Poetry, Poetry, student writing, writing, Writing Workshop
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I’ve received a lot of feedback on my own writing lately, and I can vouch for everything you say here, Shana. The conversation around the writing can be as important as the writing itself. Thank you for this thoughtful post.